The first thing that grabbed my attention about your profile was your username…I moved to Seattle from Texas a few months ago…I love it out here but I do miss home a lot. I really liked what I read about you and your interests.
Some of us have more experience or better insight than others but at the end of the day we’re all just making our best guesses.
With that in mind, I’m not saying his emails are bad.
I just believe based on my own experience they can be improved upon because sometimes we make our first emails out to be more than they should be.
I cover my approach writing first emails with online dating in my post First Contact Email Examples.
In that article I also give some examples of how I would write some first emails based on several random dating profiles.
In this article, I will review some more first dating emails based on advice I gave to a reader.He provided me with three emails he wrote and I reworked them to be closer to what I would have written.Also, I’ll be showing examples similar to the emails he sent.Because I want to avoid revealing any reader’s identity, I’m changing the specifics of his emails.I’m not going to change the general tone or point of the emails but I am trying to ensure he remains anonymous by changing some of the specifics.Here is my reader’s first email to a girl who was originally from the same area as him Lonestar State What’s up?